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I’m in 8th grade and I need help with my english homework. Anyways, On Thursday we had to bring an object into class and write a descriptive paragraph about the object. I brought in a miniature flag it looks like this http://www.promowebsite.com/minflagpole.jpg except it doesn’t have the white part on the pole just an all black pole. Anyways we have to write at least 15 sentences and I have 7 sentences. This is my paragraph so far: The patriotic American flag stands on the desk proudly. The stars, representing each state is boxed by the dark blue color surrounding them. The red rectangular strips and the white skinny stripes symbolize the 13 colonies. This quickly sewed flag represents the symbol of the U.S. It is roughly a simple replica of the currentflag of the U.S. Opposite, of the rectangular peice is a long 12 in. black pole standing tall. This tall pole holds the flag up high. (Okay I need 7 more sentences can anyone help me?? It has to describe the flag!!)

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